Nah...
Well it is a good try... For a first movie. Try using the pencil tool to draw your outlines instead of brush, and try a bit more detailed plot. Do more frame by frame animation instead of tweening... if u even did tweening
Nah...
Well it is a good try... For a first movie. Try using the pencil tool to draw your outlines instead of brush, and try a bit more detailed plot. Do more frame by frame animation instead of tweening... if u even did tweening
Is that your first movie?
That's just sad. It took me like 5 minutes to load and then theres a dumb animation going on and some stupid song. Hint: get rid of the song, the file will be at least a hundred times smaller. i guarantee you that! >:P
haha yeah I know.
but here's a hint for you: on newgrounds, people are more likely to vote 5 on larger movies because they are less likely to watch them before voting.
hahahaha sorry.
I've seen better
Keep trying though... It's really annoying watching that... the squirel poping up all over the place. It IS funny, but unreasonably sad and annoying
Not bad
When i first saw that worm thing, i felt like kicking the dumb sucker's tiny ass. BUt then as i travel through his adventures i get attached to him. When he got into the hole i knew what it was... not a surprise ending. In the end i liked the worms death... it cracked me up :P
gud job!
Not bad
Well it's kinda hard to make any sense out of that, but i'll give you a detailed review.
graphics... Very detailed, very interesting.
Sound... Could have used background music
Plot... Got no clue what its supposed to be, and that makes it funn... not funny... youre not there yet
Style... nothing wrong here
Violence makes no sense.
It's pretty neet work overall!
I'm now in the trade! currently doing contract work on website, and thats really something for a 15 year old
Age 36, Male
Web design/animation
SouthRidge
Vancouver, BC, Canada
Joined on 5/15/03